Dear god this thread is dead
I just read all the way through this monster and I have to say, I think all this shit about it just being a vehicle for weird fetishes is totally wrong.
A lot of people are also saying the writer is obviously autistic, but if you actually read this shit, it becomes quite clear that he has got genuine, and quite consistent characters.
I reckon you could probably publish this if you cut out all the sex. Mind you it is a little weird that you would only need to sex, and could really leave in the vore and probably castration.
This guy's writing reminds me a lot of RPGs I've played, particularly with harsh DMs, sure people aren't dropping like flies, but he killed the badger, and that tranny got her leg bitten off, sure she got it back, but most writers wouldn't let her lose it in the first place.
Though, there is more piss than I am comfortable with.
Honestly I care more about the story now than the sex, here is to hoping he will make more, or at least, if he has given up, he could tell us what the hell is going on